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  • bingoismygame

    Posted by bingoismygame

    Jan 04, 2010 05:13pm

    Henry has a good point. Nice work.

  • takeitandrun21

    Posted by takeitandrun21

    Jan 04, 2010 08:44am

    love the idea of this one! I too would have liked to see it brought down more. it’d be interesting to see too if it’s all brought down lower but to also have the text spread out longer to add more space on top but to also add some more shape to the overall look of the ad… wonder how that would look too. just a thought :)
    nice touch with the butterfly – very nice!

  • ArmenAdamian

    Posted by ArmenAdamian

    Dec 22, 2009 09:14pm

    good concept but i agree with Henry as well!
    stars!

  • Grenar

    Posted by Grenar Pro_badge_small

    Dec 15, 2009 10:53am

    A really nice work!!

  • stefygraf

    Posted by stefygraf

    Dec 10, 2009 03:35pm

    Quote Henry, the visual is not very balanced. But I like the concept.

  • ZooppaUser54321

    Posted by ZooppaUser54321

    Dec 10, 2009 03:29pm

    Consider moving the image and text down about an inch, the ad is a little top heavy especially since that butterfly is so eye-catching. But its a good start.